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（原创）七律．牡丹

（新韵）

霓裳楚楚慵丛挽，懒剪丰容桃月猜；

寂寞琼姿惊国色，灵奇圣手琢鸾钗；

若非青帝邀娥蕊，岂识鸦黄淘玉腮；

借得春宫还夙愿，维携芳信入瑶台。

注：偶得网友发来观赏牡丹节拍得一张图片，菱儿看了

半天竟未猜出，后经友人相告顿惭。得七律一首。

七律平起首句不入韵

中平中仄中平仄（句），中仄平平中仄平（韵）；

中仄中平中仄仄（句），中平中仄仄平平（韵）；

中平中仄中平仄（句），中仄平平中仄平（韵）；

中仄中平中仄仄（句），中平中仄仄平平（韵）。

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